Eliza Shepherd's Reflections...

Made using  Canva , Image from  Pexels Over the last few weeks my peers and I have been writing critical reflections about various topics and posting them to our online blogs. Our most recent blog posts involved leaving constructive feedback comments on a few other blog posts to help them improve their writing. This week, I have taken the feedback that was left on one of my posts and I will be attempting to use the feedback to improve my original blog post: Critical Reflection 4 - Rewrite The last few decades have involved the rapid development of different technologies, one of the major types being communication-technologies. As communication-technologies have advanced, they have become reliable, easily accessible and an integral part of our society today. About 25 years ago, Australia was only first introduced to the most basic form of internet (Zobel, 2014). At this point in time the most popular form of communication-technology was email, and many couldn’t believe...

Made using Canva , Image from Pexels Peer Feedback Over the last few weeks all of my peers have also been writing and uploading blogposts to different blog platforms. They have been choosing similar topics to what I have written about, and have expressed their own ideas and reflections.  I have read various posts and have provided my feedback about what I found great about the post and what I would suggest to them, to adjust to make their post the best it can be for the final marking.  Here are the comments that I have left on some of my peers blogposts in the last week... - Eliza